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Chapter 1 - Direction

At long last I wrote another one! XP For those of you who follow my writing this might sound a little familiar, or at least the subject might XP anyways please comment!^^

Chapter 1 - Direction

Chapter 1 - Direction
Everyday I walk this path
And everyday I find
That everyday I reach a fork
And can't make up my mind.
They present me with two choices;
The same two everyday
But I always stop to wonder
If there's not another way.
But too afraid to question
The rules by which we're run,
I continue on my journey:
I take road number one.
But the further down the road I walk,
The less I feel I belong.
As an idea begins to formulate:
I might have chosen wrong.
So the next day I come again
To that fateful intersection,
Hoping that today I will
Choose the right direction.
So I learn from my mistakes,
And now knowing what not to do,
I pass the first completely;
I take road number two.
Less mundane and more peculiar,
I prefer road number two,
But I cannot help but noticing
It's only traveled by a few.
But still it does not fulfill me,
And it cannot end my quest:
It is certain this path is better,
But it still is not the best.
So once again the next day,
I find myself perplexed.
Standing at the crossroad,
Not knowing which I should take next.
But then the answer becomes clear:
It's all up to me;
I pave the road I want to walk
I take road number three.

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B on January 7, 2008, 7:37:12 AM

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B:0 that was amazing

YumeXItachi on December 10, 2007, 6:09:29 AM

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YumeXItachiomg i love this poem j.t!! X3
your REALLY good at writing poems =3

YoriXYamiForever on December 7, 2007, 9:08:30 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow! I love it! ^^ This is a wonderful idea and it's expressed really well! Great job, and I'm so glad you're posting again ^_^

KelekiahGaladrian on December 6, 2007, 6:49:25 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianThat is really good JT-kun and I totally agree with it. ^^ I'm glad you're back to writing again. In fact... you inspired me to write a poem of my own....

SoraCooper on December 6, 2007, 3:16:23 AM

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SoraCooperWooooooow...

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L = BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! *w*

hayly125 on December 6, 2007, 12:10:38 AM

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hayly125WOW!! this is great! keep it up!!

YamiRevea on December 5, 2007, 2:00:37 PM

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YamiReveaOh my....such...A BEAUTIFUL POEM!!! *O* Wonderful!!

Blackwolfmoon on December 5, 2007, 10:35:58 AM

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Blackwolfmoon *hugs* i love it J.T............ it really speaks to me ^^

uchihagirl on December 5, 2007, 9:53:22 AM

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uchihagirlwow...its amazing, im so glad your back to writing again, youre so good at it^^ 10/10