Midgar Meets Femol (Prologue page 3)

Yay the third page!!! Sorry about Sun's transformation; I wanted to see how it worked out, but it didn't turn out the way I visualized....It's still better than I could have done last year, right? (For those of you who didn't know how I drew last summer, compare this: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-620173.html to this: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-694151.html. Watch for the change in proportions.)

And thanks to naotarou-san, for the constructive criticism!! The second panel looks a lot better now!! Arigato!!!! ^^

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