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PuffBubble on January 26, 2006, 10:29:37 PM
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I think it's okay. It's a unique style of anime! And I like it. I mean there are sertain things that could be better but I still think it's okay! ^-^
spinnerofmagic on July 20, 2005, 10:35:55 AM
riri-chan on July 20, 2005, 10:11:37 AM
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311chick on December 16, 2004, 5:02:43 AM
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legolas_is_roadkill on March 26, 2004, 5:44:24 PM
hmmm. well, i don't know what to say. Let me pull our insane uber art critic and let's get started :takes a deep breath:<br />
first. the shape of the face is strange; the right cheek is higer and has a different angle than the left. the eyebrows should be worked on more to be more effective, try looking at real people and take those as an example. the bangs are way short (even if you meant for them to be, they should be a little longer). The ears have an awkward shape to them (but then again, some pros draw em to my dislike. i don't draw ears as a big distraction). the nose is pretty o-k, i won't bother you because that's not where you need to focus. the mouth is a little TOO triangular, soften the edges.<br />
hmm, you can try these and see how it turns out, ne?<br />
love always and muchly<br />
roxana
first. the shape of the face is strange; the right cheek is higer and has a different angle than the left. the eyebrows should be worked on more to be more effective, try looking at real people and take those as an example. the bangs are way short (even if you meant for them to be, they should be a little longer). The ears have an awkward shape to them (but then again, some pros draw em to my dislike. i don't draw ears as a big distraction). the nose is pretty o-k, i won't bother you because that's not where you need to focus. the mouth is a little TOO triangular, soften the edges.<br />
hmm, you can try these and see how it turns out, ne?<br />
love always and muchly<br />
roxana