Erian

This is Erian, a character in one of my books.
I hate his nose, I messed it up cuz I thought I could make it look better... -_-"
He's one of the founders of an ancient city called Zion(nothing to do with the actual ancient city ^_0).
He and his people were the first to discover magic.
Tell me what you think, pointers, criticism, anything will make me happy! ^_^ (especially pointers!)