Obi-Wan

Okay, this drawing is an older one, but for one of my art classes I had to draw it w/ white charcoal pencil on black paper from memory-ish freehand. I had a small picture to look at, when I started, I lost it... I think I made him a bit too thin and so he doesn’t look right. This drawing was so big I had to scan it in two parts then stitch it together! There is some water damage to it, bottom right and a bit by his lip, and eye, but I fixed it best I could... and there are smudges... sorry... please comment! I want to know what you think!!!