Warrior Born

Line Art. Anything that looks like a mistake, please ignore it. TT-TT

First submission of the 2008. Wow, it should be better than a concept sketch. TT^TT

The character:

After countless redesigns and names, I found something I liked. Raydon Jagger, a guy wearing a traditional set of clothes from his village. His people are born with tail feathers and generally keep their hair no longer than shoulder length.

Yes, in his culture, that outfit would be socially acceptable. In ours, probably not so much.

About the art:

I haven't had time to finish anything, so that's my excuse for not inking a bunch of other stuff. Basically, it's a character-swap pic for my rival.

Also, according to ASVAB, I should give up illustration types of art and become a writer. As frustrated as I am with all my non-improvement-filled crap, maybe I should take its advice.

Looking for more helpful critique.

Raydon Jagger (c) Alley_Cat (Symphoniancat)