Dream Cast Pg 2
Dream Cast Pg 2
Dream Cast Pg 2 by Amy_Guardia
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The main character of this story is Damien^ ^ a 14 year old boy hunting for treasures who's about to meet a girl from another dimension,enjoy ^___^
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anime_shall_brainwash_us_all on February 17, 2006, 4:41:51 AM
Smexykage-sama on February 17, 2006, 4:38:25 AM
That looks pretty good, a little bit like Akira Toriyama's style of drawing. ^^ You did a very nice job on the expressions and bodylanguage of the character. Although you should pay a little bit more attention to the anatomy, though.... (coming from someone who also has major anatomy issues...:P)
Oh! And one little advise, you should clean it and ink it! Than it would look even better!
VEGETAS_LOVER123 on February 17, 2006, 4:38:02 AM
THIS ROCKS! i've tried so many times to do my own comic but sadly it never turns out well.I really like the characters and i'm allready hitched to see what happens!MORE COMICS!also do you have any tips for me and comic drawing?
I personally think you could get your story across to the reader better if you replaced a couple of the words with more effective ones instead of "stops" maybe you could have "huh?" or "..."
"sparkles" could be "shimmer, shimmer" or just nothing.
I don't know, just my opinion. Just attempting to help.