Ashura and gang on vacation (Page 1)

I worked on this when I went on vacation. Everyone in the comic are all my own characters, and yes, Ashura is the guy and Azella is the girl before anybody asks. When I go on vacation, my characters come with me. Hehe. Page 2 is still being worked on. ^_^ Comments welcome, flames will be laughed at!<br />
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By the way, that woman down in the last panel, Raine? Yeah. That's Ashura's mother, for those of you who don't know. Acting so innocent, hiding behind her book "Ancient Secrets Revealed."