Practice Manga: Page 3 by AnimeMangaLover

Practice Manga: Page 3

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Yeah, you guys remember this? Well, I decided to start working on it again. To see the first page, go to this link: http://fanartcentral.net/pictures.php?pid=180167 . To see the second page, go to this link: http://fanartcentral.net/pictures.php?pid=180170 . Oh, word of advice: to read the text clearly, enlarge the picture.

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Category Comics » - Original Comics
Date Submitted November 25, 2005, 4:39:45 PM
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Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on March 20, 2006, 7:23:18 PM

cool! so cute! awesome job. =^_^= *gives pocky and pixie sticks*

Wings_EbonStar on November 28, 2005, 6:53:15 AM

I really like the bubble effect thing. XD Woot. Your frames are so nice, too... aaah. *is jealous* What did I tell you? Someday, you be doin' this stuff fo' reals. XD *glomp* I have to go back and review the other pages now.

KotokoPlum on November 28, 2005, 6:22:20 AM

I suggest some darker crosshatching because I don't know if it's giving the effect you're looking for. Mostly just in the last panel, though.

Great job, AML!

Black_Breeze on November 27, 2005, 12:12:52 PM

I remember this! Hee hee, great job, love how you did the framing. Now I want to do one. :3

poison-arrow on November 27, 2005, 3:44:17 AM

cute! I like ur shading techniques

SethsRazorbladeBitch on November 26, 2005, 4:46:28 AM

Holsy Schist! I remember when you started this! xD O.O Nice work, as ALWAYS! xD
My art has more or less stayed the same. I'll never do a manga, but...that's okayz with me ^^
Keep it up, lookin' foreward to more!
Oh OH! IN my art class we get to do inking, and we could do crosshactching...I stuck to the dots xD but I just did some crosshachting in a pic a while ago xD

terra13 on November 25, 2005, 9:47:19 AM

This manga is really done well! I can't draw manga for crud I always end up redoing a character so many times that it ruins the paper TT_TT saddening.. anyways I love your comic!!!