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"Pack! Pack!"

"Pack! Pack!"

"Pack! Pack!" by Aspen
"Pack! Pack!" by Aspen

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Sworn to creep you out if you look at it too late at night! This is Brightpaw, before she became Lostface or Brightheart, when Fireheart found her.

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Category Books » By Author Name » Erin Hunter
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emmywentz on October 10, 2007, 9:01:23 AM

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emmywentzI hate that part, so chilling, I read that part at night and I couldn't go to sleep... Very nicley done, very creepy, but in a good way! lol

Tjh1996 on July 20, 2009, 3:52:36 PM

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Tjh1996same here!

darkwolf333 on June 26, 2009, 4:30:44 PM

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darkwolf333wow this is really good. poor brightheart

girlover1096 on May 2, 2008, 8:37:27 AM

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girlover1096did you read of brghtheart's side ofthe story in the secrets of the clans book?

Aspen on May 6, 2008, 11:52:24 AM

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AspenI didn't read that book. *shrug*

girlover1096 on May 13, 2008, 9:34:39 PM

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girlover1096it's so sad!

InvaderAmmy00 on January 31, 2008, 6:46:22 PM

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InvaderAmmy00awww
that was a sad part in the book

girlover1096 on May 2, 2008, 8:37:41 AM

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girlover1096it was.

moonpaw on October 13, 2007, 10:45:45 AM

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moonpaw:-( That's saddest thing that happend in Warriors! Just because Swiftpaw died doesn't mean every one has to fall all over him. No one ever noticed him until then! P.S. your great with cat expressions! *faves*

Aspen on October 23, 2007, 10:02:16 AM

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Aspen:D Thank you.

Fullmetalchibi on September 15, 2007, 11:19:49 AM

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FullmetalchibiBRIGHTHEART! That was such a sad part of Warriors... O.O

Aspen on September 17, 2007, 7:50:17 AM

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AspenYeah, it's so sad. D:

Lanayru on May 2, 2007, 3:46:39 AM

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Lanayrusniff... I hate what bluestar called her! Lostface. what a terrible name! Swiftpaw!!! Noooo!!

faderocks on September 9, 2007, 8:47:11 AM

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faderocksi luv that name

Aspen on May 13, 2007, 11:48:57 PM

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AspenYeh. Bluestar sorta cracked right near the end.

Jadeclaw on June 19, 2007, 2:24:13 AM

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Jadeclawi love this pic! u are so good at creating emotions with the cat's faces. poor little Brightpaw is scared to death!

JamietheGuardian on June 2, 2007, 10:47:17 AM

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JamietheGuardianI was so sad when Swiftpaw died. But Cloudtail still loves Brightheart, so, his loyalty never ceases to amaze me.

Aspen on June 9, 2007, 11:11:47 AM

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AspenYeah, they're awesome!

sharp-fang on March 1, 2007, 10:25:51 AM

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sharp-fangThat's in "A Dangerous Path"!Right after Swiftpaw dies from the Dogs....*faves*

Aspen on March 2, 2007, 5:24:28 AM

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AspenYeah, I know. :D Thanks!

CoconutMangoFox on February 3, 2007, 7:03:53 AM

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CoconutMangoFoxYAAFWAAA!!! *falls out of chair* Um. . Right. Awesome pic. You're right, it did creep me out last night. =w= Her eye looks so wild and haunting. . *shivers*

Rancor125 on January 27, 2007, 6:43:42 AM

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Rancor125Bluestar really did go insane, didn't she?

Aspen on January 27, 2007, 9:56:08 PM

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AspenYeah... creepay.

faderocks on September 9, 2007, 8:46:16 AM

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faderocksya but i like the name lostface

Flyingstar on October 28, 2006, 3:00:42 AM

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Flyingstaryou are right this does creep you out

Spottedfur on October 28, 2006, 9:17:13 AM

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Aspen on October 28, 2006, 9:33:29 AM

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AspenWhat?

Spottedfur on October 29, 2006, 1:29:41 AM

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SpottedfurOh, nothing

Spottedfur:>

Aspen on October 30, 2006, 3:23:16 AM

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AspenNo, seriously.

Spottedfur on October 31, 2006, 7:15:11 AM

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SpottedfurOkay, this sounds really wierd, so if you really wanna hear it reply

Spottedfur:>

Aspen on October 31, 2006, 9:26:08 AM

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AspenAlright. I'm all ears.

Spottedfur on November 1, 2006, 7:57:20 AM

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SpottedfurAright (please don't get mad), I now Flyingstar in person, and I've seen some of her drawing and I thought they looked alot like yours, so I made up this thing to anoy her by saying stuff like "Hello Aspen, how was your day Aspen, call me Aspen..." and then when she finally proved that she wasn't Aspen I already posted this comment. THen I thought she was Deviltail, so now I bug her by say "Hello Aspen, Deviltail, Flyingstar if that's your real name (man this comment is long) But now I know that you're Aspen and not Flyingstar haveing two accounts on FAC. Another reson I thought she was Aspen is cause; remember that time when I thought you were ignoring me? (which you didn't,now I Know)
THat day at lunch Flyingstar kept ingoring me too, so I'm like A HA!!! YOu are Aspen!!! I'm sorry if I'm comfusing u, Aspen or Flyingstar (sorry but I'm still not clear maybe you are another person or Flyingstar, and you don't want me to know, or maybe Aspen is Flyingstar, but that's another story!) I hope that clears things up.:>

Spottedfur:>

Aspen on November 1, 2006, 8:25:11 AM

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AspenI am THE one and only Aspen. I probably don't even live in the same state as you peeps.
I have no separate account, and if neither of your friends owns a Wacom Intuos3 Graphics tablet, that clears things up.
'Kay? I'm gonna delete the whole conversation now, if you don't mind.
Don't worry, I'm not angry.

Spottedfur on November 1, 2006, 11:26:01 AM

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SpottedfurI am glad you're okay with it, and yeah delet please!

Spottedfur:>

Spottedfur on October 28, 2006, 9:16:14 AM

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SpottedfurWhat Flyingstar said,

Brightheart on September 10, 2006, 10:45:09 AM

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BrightheartI luved that part, and that's why I called myself Brightheart.

mrsirindeed7402 on May 7, 2006, 1:02:42 PM

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mrsirindeed7402i meant to say ear NOT war!!!

mrsirindeed7402 on May 7, 2006, 9:30:23 AM

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mrsirindeed7402thats REALLY good, poor, poor Brightpaw(lostface, brightheart) anyway, though, would u mind doing a request, for me, his name is Icepelt and he had blusish silverish paws, tail tip, war, and spot on back!!! THANKS!!!!!!!1

HyperactiveFox on April 26, 2006, 12:21:33 PM

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HyperactiveFoxwow, you're good. Yea, that was so sad when that happened! Brightpaw was so cool...

Starpaw on April 16, 2006, 11:20:47 AM

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StarpawThats really good Aspen.~snifle~ I cried really hard when the happened for fear she might die and the fact that Swiftpaw died,I shall always remember him.I just though of something could I ask you a favor can you please draw Swiftpaw up in Starclan with Bluestar.

x_SilverWolf_x on April 15, 2006, 2:14:05 AM

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x_SilverWolf_xVery nice pic! I cried here too =( it was so sad =( i miss swiftpaw even more *crys* but remember she was just an apprentice ;) you drew her like a true warrior

Blackstormluvr on April 13, 2006, 6:37:48 AM

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BlackstormluvrOk, I dunno why but I keep coming back to look at this pic... It's...It's drawing me in...

*Click click click click click click click click click x a million more times of Click click click*

Oh sorry I was pressingn the add to favorites button. :D

GamerGirlGG on April 9, 2006, 11:45:35 AM

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GamerGirlGG Wow, frightening! Poor Brightheart! I was really mad at Bluestar when she named her Lostface! That was cruel, anyway, good pic.

I really like your work, I was wondering if you could do a cat with a pure white body, gold paws, a gold tail, and golden splecks on her. Her name is Goldpaw. I would like it if you did that for me!

Wolf_Of_Shadows on March 16, 2006, 2:37:18 AM

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Wolf_Of_ShadowsI was so sad when that happened to her! Anyway great pic!

Sunfur on March 6, 2006, 5:34:18 AM

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SunfurGreat picture! It was sooooo sad when Brightpaw was hurt by the dogs. Keep it up!

Dark_Light on March 2, 2006, 8:03:53 AM

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Dark_LightCongrats Aspen! You got piccie of the hour!!! Keep up the great work!

bluewolf8000 on January 24, 2006, 7:20:42 AM

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bluewolf8000hey aspen I was wondering if you could draw a picture for me. well you know at the end of of the 5 book where Bluestar was pulled out of the river and her and Fireheart were talking because Fireheart didn't want her to die. well could you draw that scene for me please thanks.

sango_the_exterminater on December 22, 2005, 11:06:01 AM

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sango_the_exterminaterI remember that part! That was so sad!! Poor Brightpaw!! Then Bluestar thought they were all traitors!! At least Brightpaw lived.

ShadowCat258 on November 24, 2005, 9:51:52 AM

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ShadowCat258omg i cried @ this part :(

u should put a spoiler/violence warning tho (even tho ive read lll of them)

Fire_Feline on November 10, 2005, 11:43:59 PM

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Fire_Felineoh that part was soooooo sad i feel sory for both her and Cloudtail. And awsome job you really captuerd the emotion just right.

starfire_ on October 14, 2005, 10:25:06 AM

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starfire_Oh my gosh I was sooooooooo sad at that part that was my favorite cat too ='(

Splixx on September 20, 2005, 1:34:47 AM

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Splixxwow she is freaky looking...my boy friend wears tha expression when he first wakes up in the morning...hehehe

silverfox on July 29, 2005, 8:57:42 AM

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silverfoxOh, I just looked at it again, and I got shivvers... And it's about 4 in the afternoon.... Very creepy, but somehow kawaii. Yes yes. XD

Seris on July 20, 2005, 3:25:22 AM

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Serisshe has the whole'whats going to happen to me?" look :) very nicey piccy

Seris on July 19, 2005, 1:47:22 PM

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Serisyou got the emotion sooo good there! alas, i was bawling my eyes out also...

silverfox on July 15, 2005, 1:30:18 PM

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silverfoxYes yes! Aspen-chan, you rock. That is so cute, I was bawling at that part.

Gyah!

Keep up the good work!!

~Pip

Echidnachick on July 12, 2005, 4:44:37 AM

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EchidnachickI thought that part was so sad. Great pic +favs