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This is a really awesome comic, I love Varjak Paw! I hope you'll continue this sometime ^^

Ah...probably not...I'm sorry! I still love the idea, but I have so many other comics running right now that I don't know if I'll ever come back to VP. :(

hey, is it ok if i request a manga page for you? its three kits.... Crimsonkit, who is a red kit with blue eyes, and a determanation to become an apperentice early. her sister, icekit, was a light blue kit, like bluestar, and followed her sister, evan though she knew it was wrong. her eyes were also blue. there brother, moonkit, was a grey tabby, and rather aggresive, and would follow his sister without a doubt. he has green eyes. there mother, Dapplefrost, was a silver she cat, who was short haired, sleek, and had dark grey spots on her body and stripes on her tail, and blue eyes. they are thunderclan cats, though dapplefrost was born in riverclan.heres the story:

CrimsonKit:Come on! or are you flea bitten mice? lets go! if we go to the thunderpath, then they'll HAVE to make us apperentces early!

Icekitwell...i guess...but we have to get back before we get in trouble! Moonkit: yeah! lets go! I dont want to waste another Second!

All three*Wait until all the other cats are busy, then when they are certin, sneak out, and walk until they come across the thunderpath

dapplefrost:*comes the queens den after stretching her legs a bit, and can still smell the kits scent, so runs after them herself*

All three kitsare at the thubderpath, dancing in it, and her a noise, but dont see the monster coming towerds them until...

Dapplefrost:sees the kits on the thunderpath, and runs, pushing crimsonkit out of the way, but the other kits had already been kit, along with Dapplefrost's leg. The twoleg gets out of the monser, and gently moves the kits away from the thunderpath, the looking back, gets into her monster, and drives off.

Crimsonkit*looks at icekit and moonkit, not moving, and bleeding everywhere, then her mother, who is breathing, but struggleing to walk* "mama...are moonkit and icekit going to be ok?

Dapplefrost*looks at crimsonkit with a fake smile, but then her face is filed with sorrow* im sorry, crimsonkit, but im afraid not...*shuts her eyes, and a few tears leek out.*

Crimsonkit*whispers* Im so sorry, this is my fault. but i promise, if i get the chance, i know i cant avange you, but i will be the best warrior i can ever be, for all three of us. i know it wont bring you back, and im so sorry.


Thats as far as i got, this is based on a warrior online RP. wow, i just looked at this...its like, super long....wow...but im going to post it because its a good stroy, but i dont think anyone would want to make a comic for that....its super long, and i know drawings take time....

Oooh! Can I make a request?

awsome i lurv varjak paw and your comic!

Dont worry about the request, take your time i can wait :]