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yea.. very true... it isn't ur style or talent... it just needs stronger lines... distinguish it more and also.. try to think ahead and imagine how it will turn out... such as becasue her hand is cut off by the line of her arm... u don't want that if ur lookin to impress... and mayyybe... slighty more detail... and as live said... a bit of shading here and ther won't hurt anyone... hope that helps and i look forward to seeing more of ur art! ^-^ ...yea.. i really like the hair and the face and the pants... really good work ^-^ ...sorry for the length too :p

Ok i like this pic but if you want to improve just darken it up and add more shadding like to the hair and the face but the rest is fine your a really nice artist and this is a really nice pic keep up the great work!!!