Chapter one: page two

xD I really like the bottom-right corner! the girl on the left looks so cool!

Once again, all of it is amazing.

I love the background, no matter how odd, strange, or dumb it may look, I love the colors and shading(even though it's in grayscale), and the style. It's beautiful and wonderful and you did an awesome job.

Some of those poses are really sexy (wow, did I just say that?) and awesome looking.

The two hands together is probably one of my favorite parts of the whole picture. ^^

I love it!

*favs*

And I'm sorry this took me a while to comment on. Been sick and busy and had school in the way lately XP

i love the hands too!

ya now.. tomorrow has turned into 3 days now >.> and im really procrastanateing posting sutff, it takes time for the stuff i am doing D: like talking! or pointless surfing of the web! >.< nah, i just dont feel like posting..J.T asks for the new page everyday x3 if it wasnt for him i dont think i'd ever post!

Anyways thankyou! :3 i always love your comments! okay i should shut up now cuz im in a ranting mood x3

Hands are difficult to draw. I congratulate you. You should love them too though. They look AWESOME.

That's okay. You do things on your own time and no quicker, otherwise, they might come out forced or crappy looking. Besides, if you're lazy like me, not wanting to post happens. I suffer it constantly. Well, I want to post, I just don't want to take the time to outline or color. Sometimes we need reminders like the awesomeness of JT-kun.

You're welcome!!! Really? I'm glad! I try to do my best to help people improve and to let them know their art is appreciated.

RANTING MOODS!!!!!

Yes, some of the poses are sexy. Those were the two I had in mind, by the way ^^ Me likes!

Lol, well the pages are done, but not ready to post cuz FAC doesnt accept the format they are in so it takes time and slows my comp down to a complete stop, but no one cares about that cept me i just have to Post post post! >.< but im glad im not the only one who gets in the anti-posting mood as i call it :3

Ooh, that sucks. Stupid FAC. It's so mean that way. I won't say "post post post" like those evil idiots, but I happen to understand how difficult it is to draw, color, reformat, sign in to FAC, write a description, and post pictures. Anti-posting mood. I'm still in one of those XP I hope I'll get out of it eventually XP Post when you can; I can wait. ^^

P.S some of the poses are sexy xP)like the first one if i didnt mess up and the last one x3

You get alot better at drawing and effets every page.

thanks! xD, i think its vuz my art teacher runs us like a slave driver Oo.. or maybe thats cuz i have 5 art classes >.>

Oooooooooooh, LOVE the last two panels. ^^ You do really well on expressions, hands and hair. :D

One thing, did Alagor's wings disappear? lol

DANGIT!!! >.<'' i knew i forgot something!!!!!!!! meeeeeeeehh.. TT.TT

glad you like the last two panels