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Ta da! More Lost manga! Gasp! It's been over a year since I've drawn one of these, and I can actually bear to look at this art without wanting to puke! Yay!
And there will be at least two more pages of this in the way too near future.

Well, I just skipped over three chapters from where I last left off! Horay!
So to catch you up: Katsu gets owned by Kumori, Tez saves him, and there are a whole bunch of small plot points building up to something big, but thats fiftyish pages of text that I'd have to tell you about.
Anyway, the book is important, in fact, I bet this is confusing to everyone but me. So, if you have a question, go ahead and ask, I probably know the answer.

The fox here is just some random kid, I think I'll name him Sam. He's rather unimportant, he does like, two things that actually effect the plot. He was supposed to be someone different, but I decided I couldn't draw as well as I can imagine, so, random boy!

Anyway, I wanted to draw something with Frost, so here's the first scene with him. This is totally in the middle of a chapter too, sry about that.

I guess Katsu is too good for a shirt today. Actually, he just forgot to put one on. Seriously. Talk to the ghost cat. I don't like drawing people without shirts, then I have to deal with more anatomy...grrrr....why do I do this to myself? And he's wearing Kai's pants. Lol.


Yes, I do actually know how hard it is to hold a sword with one hand. No, I don't care to deal with the realism of this. And Katsu can probably manage it, he's pretty buff anyway. He couldn't use his right arm if he wanted to (BTW he is left handed, so it's less of a problem.)

Oh, and this is my first draft, I still have to ink it, I'm putting it up now because I want you all to tell me whats wrong with it before I do so.
Constructive Crit is much loved.