Dakota Vampryyi

This is my OC, Dakota Vampryyi (which is Finnish for vampire/vampiress if I remember correctly). My scanner messed up the colors and now she's kinda tinted red. Sorry. I'm working on a story with her in it at the moment which I hope comes out better than the others I've written. She's Erol's younger sister by 2 years and she has a twin named Revanche. In my story, the people of Vythtown reffer to her as "The Beast". She's half vampiress half dragon demon that was lynched at the Lynching Tree for various reasons by the twons people. You have to read the story to find out (it's not posted yet, but it will be soon). The words in the corner say, "You can never kill me..." in Finnish...at least I hope they do, but my Finnish wrong most of the time (which is sad considering I'm half Finnish). Please comment and tell me what you think!