Disposable Soldier: Page 3
Disposable Soldier: Page 3
Disposable Soldier: Page 3 by Burgundy-Sky
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This picture is misproportioned is several ways. Her arms are too small, her head seems too big, and in the second frame her neck looks two long and skinny. But, I tried to proportion the second frame correctly, but it didn't quite work. The text is hard to read, so here it is: (I'll do this for all of them because I don't type in the text.)<br />
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Person one: "...Calyse Faline..."<br />
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Person two: "...Ah...I see. She will have to do..."<br />
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Second Frame: Calyse-"Dumbass."<br />
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Second Frame: Another person-"Huh?"<br />
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That is the text. As always, constructive criticism is appreciated, along with any random comments.
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Person one: "...Calyse Faline..."<br />
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Person two: "...Ah...I see. She will have to do..."<br />
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Second Frame: Calyse-"Dumbass."<br />
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Second Frame: Another person-"Huh?"<br />
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That is the text. As always, constructive criticism is appreciated, along with any random comments.
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