The Slow Fall Through the Veil

Well, this is my first "high quality finished work"...damn, that blue took me forever and it still looks like crap...*laughs* Yes, I know the background sucks, but I got EXTREMELY bored and just wanted to finish it. So, obviously, this is the scene in OOTP where *sniff* Bellatrix hits Sirius with a curse and he falls through the veil. The scene:
"...The second jet of light hit him squarely on the chest.
"The laughter had not quite died from his face, but his eyes widened in shock...
"...It seemed to take Sirius an age to fall. His body curved in a graceful arc as he sank through the ragged veil hanging from the arch...
"And Harry saw the look of mingled fear and surprise on his godfather's wasted, once-handsome face as he fell through the ancient doorway and disappeared behind the veil, which fluttered for a moment as though in a high wind and then fell back into place."
So, there it is, in all its tragic beauty. Oh, and by the way, I do take requests, but I'm slightly particular...I have to be inspired, and I don't do CGs, only colored pencil, paint, watercolor, charcoal, etc..."natural mediums", if you will. Enjoy, and make requests if you wish! Oh, by the way, colored with Crayola colored pencils. Please, please, please comment!!!