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Wow, very very nice clothes folds, gray stuff, and expressions! lol I LOVE that crazed pic on the bottom left! lol and then she just runs away xD cute passed out pics too, and the boy looking down on her looks really sweet and I love the way the light shines on him from behind ^^ Wait, is that blood on his chin? When did that happen? Nice pose and suv in the top panel and I like the way the chars coming over to them look so noodley. whoa they're mad! I definitely just noticed that... *totally oblivious* weird. Didn't that lady have dark hair before? Anyway, very awesome page :D

Haha!! Thank you for catching the hair flub!!! You'd make a GREAT editor!! You are DEFINATELY getting a free copy if I finish this! :D *many thank you's and hugs*
Yeah the noodles came from inability to hold the cheap hotel pen straight when inking... I'm going to fix the hair flub, tree branch issues, and anything else you'll point out to me :3 Thank you so much for the help and support!!
Oh! And blood should? I think? I forget... but I think he explains it... (I'm on page like... 20-something for drawing and forgot these pages >.<; )

Yay! Glad to be helpful *beams* :D
You're welcome!
Blood should what? Happen? Yeah, it makes sense after he explains that he bit his tongue. And y'know mouth stuff bleeds more than anything because the spit mixed in makes it seems like more, so it all works out ^^