Love

I like this pic, it's very good! I want to read your story now...I think I'll go do that! *faves*

OMG!!! i done a pic like that!!
but its NC-17..LOL

Nice... what ever you do, dont colour it...
I like it the way it is

Big HUGE fan of the story, AngolMoaChan on FF.net! I love this! It's SO adorable!

You know, I also have another song:

{introduction}
Ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Yeyeyeayea!

{first verse}
I've been beaten way too many times to count
I feel like holding it all in
But truly feel like letting out
And I've been threatened oh so many awful ways
It's been a word and it's been a phrase
I'm counting the numbers to my days
No one seemed to know or seemed to care
Until the day I met you
Life changed from there

{chorus}
You were the only one who saw my fears
You're the only one who dried my tears
You, you
You were the only one when I cried out for help and no one evem seemed to care
You were the only one there

{second verse}
I've been sitting near the bushes all this time
My life didn't seem to rhyme
I didn't know if I'd be fine
And I've been suffering
All these oh so many years
They've never failed to bring me tears
But I'm crying as we speak
All these years have been full of pain and strife
Until that very moment
You changed my life {back to chorus}

{extra part after chorus}
I've been looking for and answer
And I've also been praying too
No one seemed to care about me
I didn't know what to do
I've been suffering my whole life
Living with agony and pain
Until the moment that you met me
Out came the sun from the rain
You are the only one who's cared about me
The only one who's ever changed my life {back to the chorus a few times}

Anyway, I hope you like this song, too! It's called The Only One.

Yeah! You're right! That song WAS good! So good, in fact, I've been spending the last 15 minutes looking for it online because I thought it was a real song. ^^; Uh, anyway, thanks for that and I'll be putting this song in later chapters AND give you credit!

You know, I wrote a song for your story and I think it's really good. It goes like this:

[introduction]
Oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh! Yeah!

[first verse]
I know that there are times when you've been bad to me
You've whipped me to the ground
You've slapped my face
And I know that this is not really the place for me
All I want is love
All I want is grace
But I realize now that's never gonna happen
So now I stand up and say

[chorus]
I'm better off alone
Away from the pain
And I never wanna see your face again
I'm better off alone
Away from the world
So now you know the truth it's been unfurled
I'm better off alone

[second verse]
I hope and pray that you will be kinder to me
That's the most that I hope and that's really all I pray
But I also pray that there will be a place for me
A place where I can grow
A place where i will stay
I cry just about every day and night
And I wonder if love will win the fight [go back to chorus]

[extra part after the second verse and chorus whatever it's called]
You give me scars upon my face
You pound upon my head
You say that if I mess up once then you'll have me dead
You beat me with an iron rod
You make me really weak
Just look at all the bloody tears running down my cheek
You tell me I'm not good and that you hate me
I'm quietly waiting, anticipating
[back to the chorus about 2 times mabye]

The title of the song is I'm Better Off Alone just like your story.

Shadow ShellShipping !

Thats..so..sweet..I..I..*sniffsniff*Reminds me...