Don't go
Don't go
Don't go by Danny_Fantom

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Kratosgirl14 on April 12, 2006, 3:16:20 AM
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kos on September 21, 2005, 1:10:25 PM
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I like the way that this picture captures an 'action sequence' in a single snapshot. He starts to fly off, she reaches out to stop him, and their eyes lock for just a moment... very nice.
Suggestions for improvement:
- I'm not sure what the curved purple is in the background... a balcony railing? Maybe the perspective is a bit strange on the left hand side.
- The sleeve on Sam's right arm seems to have ignored the law of gravity.
- The pose of both characters looks 'static' even though it is an action shot. Perhaps try having Sam stepping, or leaning forward. Try experimenting a bit with more active poses.
Overall, it's a great picture. You're very talented and getting better all the time.
FoxyRoxy on August 30, 2005, 6:14:00 AM
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Allie on August 30, 2005, 1:35:34 AM
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