Dream (pg 4)
Dream (pg 4)
Dream (pg 4) by Dark_Alchemist
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(keyboard smash)
Ahh, I'M SORRY. I know it's been a month. I can only offer my sincerest apologies and a barrage of excuses, most of which are quite lame. I was in the worst drawing rut ever, it was the end of the grading period so I had a LOT of homework, I was for some reason getting next to no sleep. And my friend found the memory card that had my KH2 game on it ... so of course I haven't been wasting my spare time on video games ... Not to mention, I am a procrastinator. Probably the worst you've ever seen. So ... yeah. Please don't kill me.
But. Picture. I couldn't get it to lie straight in the scanner. I cropped off the crooked edges in Paint, but if it looks tilted, then that's why.
The pen I used for the panel spaces chose now to die on me. Which is why it's all yucky.
The speech bubble in panel one says, 'Look!' I hate stipling. Very much. I couldn't think of a better way to convey what I wanted, so that's the end result.
On another note, I really like the last panel. The fire in particular. Don't ask what happened to the shirt; I wanted to draw the scar. Ehm ... it's a dream, though, so it doesn't matter, because ... I said so.
The rest of the pages should be up soon. As in, the next few days. But don't take my word for it. I'm on spring break, so I should have time, though I also want to work on the story I'm writing. In light of the homework, I've had to put it on hiatus, and I really need to start writing again.
-phantom
(keyboard smash)
Ahh, I'M SORRY. I know it's been a month. I can only offer my sincerest apologies and a barrage of excuses, most of which are quite lame. I was in the worst drawing rut ever, it was the end of the grading period so I had a LOT of homework, I was for some reason getting next to no sleep. And my friend found the memory card that had my KH2 game on it ... so of course I haven't been wasting my spare time on video games ... Not to mention, I am a procrastinator. Probably the worst you've ever seen. So ... yeah. Please don't kill me.
But. Picture. I couldn't get it to lie straight in the scanner. I cropped off the crooked edges in Paint, but if it looks tilted, then that's why.
The pen I used for the panel spaces chose now to die on me. Which is why it's all yucky.
The speech bubble in panel one says, 'Look!' I hate stipling. Very much. I couldn't think of a better way to convey what I wanted, so that's the end result.
On another note, I really like the last panel. The fire in particular. Don't ask what happened to the shirt; I wanted to draw the scar. Ehm ... it's a dream, though, so it doesn't matter, because ... I said so.
The rest of the pages should be up soon. As in, the next few days. But don't take my word for it. I'm on spring break, so I should have time, though I also want to work on the story I'm writing. In light of the homework, I've had to put it on hiatus, and I really need to start writing again.
-phantom
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mandy94t on April 7, 2007, 6:18:23 AM
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Awesome,yay first comment.I wonder when Psyn will wake up?YOU ROCK THIS MANGA IS AWESOMEDark_Alchemist on April 7, 2007, 7:19:07 PM
Ehm ... it's not sound effects. The only dialogue thus far is on this page. In the speech bubble at top. I do know my hiragana; the words are actually english, so I used katakana. Because that's what it's for. xD; ehm ... yes, that is ouroboros. As to when he'll wake up ... well in the original he woke up at the end of page three, but that ending is boring so I continued instead. Sorry, I kind of replied to all four of your comments at once. Which, by the way, I appreciated very much. ::bows::