My First Comic Strip.

This looks good! Especially for your first comic. ^v^ I can't really give the best advice on this since I'm still learning about comics myself, but with the knowledge I have, what I noticed is that it's hard to tell exactly what's going on. the first panel is good, but in the second one, it's hard to tell what the character is looking at or getting upset about, you understand what I mean? Since the first panel is your establishing panel, try to have all three characters in that shot. So you know what the second character is getting upset about. The other thing I noticed is Nika is only in the first & last panels. so It's kind of hard to tell where she stands in the whole comic. But like I said, you did good for your first try. Keep it up! ^v^

yeah i understand, ^_^ i didnt really know how to place 3 characters in one panel cause i didnt want rukante to be RIGHT next to them, and i still have trouble puting depth into a picture. >_< he would have to be a good distance away, as well as nika in the other panels. thats pretty much why. ^_^

yeah, I totally understand what you mean. Composing a picture is hard enough, let alone a comic. XD Just another one of those art forms with enough technicalities to make your head spin. XD But just keep working at it. you'll get it. ^V^

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glad you think its so funny
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lol Cool!^^

thank you!
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you're welcome^^