Advent Children Cloud

Wow! Nice! Cloud from advent children! Nice Job!

WOAH this is AWESOME

Very nice rendition of Cloud. ^_^ Well since you asked me to give you some tips in your artwork, I'll try the best I can to help you. ^^;

You did a nice job on the face and the neck is anatomically correct. I've looked through your gallery and saw that you seem to have a good grasp on the placement of arm muscles and such.
However, in this picture, Cloud's right arm (our left) aka biceps are a bit too big. ^^; If you look at a normal human, their upper arm muscles are slimmer.
Also, one last thing. ^^; (I hope I'm helping you and not pissing you off... I wouldn't want that to happen. ^^; ) His waist area is a little bit too thin for a male. It's possible if he were female... but he's not. ^^;

Anywho, I hope that advice helps you some in the future. You're doing a great job and I know you'll be a great artist in the future if you continue to improve. :D

Wow! This looks amazing. The shading is very well done. Excellent job, keep up the great work.
Yours truly,
Winters Phoenix.
xx

The shading is really good keep it up you should add color.