sketch (clover) in work help neede here!!!

You could try laying everything out with a ruler and then making them fancier. That may help you keep them where you want them to be.

the face kinda needs work, not the eyes, but more the nose and the mouth. the nose is kinda in the wrong place and needs a diff shape, and the mouth is a line o.o it needs a lil curve ya no? *poke* This is really a great piccie otherwize! really great ^_^

i use the same pose because i care more about the clothings....you will see they all have different outfits which i made myself..please check the other picture and then youll see what i finally made of it<br />

Hiya!<br />
See you have been drawing the same person and same pose .... Anyway, as for the wing thing, I think you can roughly sketch out the way you want the wings to look like before adding in the details. I suggest you check out some of CLAMP's works or -who's that lady who draw Kamikaze Kaito Jeanne??-'s works. Everything starts with basics and it is very important to get the picture of wings clear, before going into drawing mechanical wings or adding anything to them. (I find that the wings you drew kind of lack feathers.)<br />
And also, where's the other wing??

the wings are wrong in combination with the rest of the body....i dont know how to turn them more to the side without ruining the picture<br />

I think the wings look cool. =/