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Brendan & Rose

Brendan & Rose

Brendan & Rose by Espeonmaster
Brendan & Rose by Espeonmaster

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Espeonmaster
You probably have no idea who the girl is, so let me explain. I'm currently writing a FanFiction that this'll go with, and this is the rough-draft of the piccie.

Please comment! I am counting on tips and comments so I can fix it up and color it.

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Category Games » - by Publisher » Nintendo » Pokémon series
Date Submitted
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Comments 2
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken About 30 minutes
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Espeonmaster on September 26, 2005, 3:10:10 PM

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EspeonmasterOkay, I took care of the butt thing, and am working on the others. Once the improvements are done, I'll rescan and delete this on to put up.. er, more improved piccie.. *I guess*

RangerGirl on September 22, 2005, 8:54:48 AM

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RangerGirlHaha, i finally saw it. It's good its not in color yet, cuz my graphics that are currently oh so messed up wouldn't show it.

Anyway, yeah, the butts are too flat. Brendan's hair is a little long, and their feet are too short. Feet are supposed to be as long as their elbow to their wrist.

Brendan's ear looks good, but Rose's is too high.

You upper arm could be a little longer, and the lower could be shorter.

Heh heh, I'll like to see that fanfic. Well, keep workin' on it. It's cute.