All Apologies Big Cheese X Polly

All Apologies Big Cheese X Polly

Another Alternate Ending To The Comet Fiasco

Big Cheese was gonna be banished or was he?

He was sad cuse he was gonna be sent out on a raft away from his secret crush.

This was his last day he had to tell Polly how he felt and apologize for his wrong doings.

He took a walk of what would be his last walk in Little Tokyo cuse it was most certain Princess V Would not lift his punishment.

He bought a sunflower and went to say his final goodbye to Polly.

Little did he know he was being followed.

he would have been to upset anyway to notice Princess V was tailing him.

She thought what is that Fox up too one last plan before he's banished he wouldn't dare.

He saw him go to The Pizza Place and saw him walk up to Polly who was in her armor just in case Cheese tried anything before his banishment.


V hid behind a tree and watched something she would not have expected from him.

He blushed and said "um this is for you."


Polly blushed too said "what for?"

He said "Please accept this as an apology for all the trouble i have caused."


he seemed a bit Jumpy to V and Polly.

Both wondered what he was trying to pull.

Him an apology why now.

He then explained how he truly felt and that this was his final chance to tell her before his banishment.

he wanted to say goodbye and to say he was sorry for all his wrong doings.

And that he would miss her and that he never meant it when he called her ugly.

He said he was just using a juvenile ploy cuse he knew she would never like him.

Polly told him she did feel the same and would miss him too.


Princess V had witnessed something she did not expect he seemed like he wanted to reform and that she felt that maybe a girl in his life would help him do that.

She called out from behind the tree surprising the fox and the cat.

"Seymour i don't normally do this but i am revoking your banishment if you promise to behave from now on.

It seems you were trying to win money and power or something to win her over to me but what you did took a lot of courage.

it is not easy to tell someone how you feel if you're not sure how they feel about you."

If you two want to be alone now I'll go back to the palace.


if you can keep in line maybe i will give you your old job back on the council."

V left and they were alone.

Polly said "That was nice of her strange but nice."

He said "I know very unlike her."

She said "well maybe it's cuse she saw the potential of what could be a beautiful relationship between us."

"I guess so" he said then he blushed as Polly kissed his lips.

He kissed her back and after the kissing they decided to get married eventually.

Princess V was back behind the tree watching in secret.

And she thought i never thought i could be a matchmaker for Big Cheese and Polly but ya never know.

The End

Just a short story to explain the pic

nothing to do with a Nirvana song

I used colored pencils and edited it in HP Image a bit



Big Cheese in the pic is saying Please Accept this flower as an apology for all the trouble i have caused


sorry for bad spelling

Polly is saying what for as in what is the flower for

and it says jumpy cuse he is a jumpy fox^^

as seen in the story