Dance Of Fate Unedited

Dance Of Fate Unedited

This years dance was coming up fast that very night in fact and Big Cheese was the only one who did not have a date yet.

Princess Vi asked him why he had not asked a girl to the dance.

he told Princess Vi he felt so nervous about asking a certain girl he liked to the dance because he was not sure if she liked him.

So Princess Vi asked him "what is the name of the girl you like?"

He said blushing "I like Polly Esther but i don't think she likes me."

"Well Seymour you won't know unless you ask her if she will or won't accept an invitation to go with you to the dance.

So I'm ordering you to at least ask her okay?"

"Um okay i guess I'll go ask her tomorrow."

she yelled "GO NOW!!"

"Yes your majesty right away" but he thought oooh boy what a mood swing.

He walked up to The Pizza cat's house and knocked on the door.

there was No answer yet so he leaned against the door.


All of the sudden Polly opened the door and Big cheese fell backwards into Polly's lap.

They both blushed a bit and Polly helped him up.

She said "Big Cheese why are you here?"

he blushed with his hand rubbing the back of his head and he said


"ER i was wondering if you would like to go with me to the Dance at the Palace tonight?"

Polly blushed cuse she had never expected him to ask her on a date.

"ER Polly i know I'm blushing cuse i am a bit nervous around you and I'm not sure if you would want to go with me.

I suspect maybe you're blushing cuse you're getting sick so I'll leave now.

"I would love to go i just was blushing cuse i did not expect you to ask me on a date."

You'll go with me? he asked a bit dumbfounded

i did say yes did i not of course I'll go with you ya silly fox.

So The time of the dance had arrived and Polly noticed her date was a little nervous so she held on to him and started dancing a bit.

He was still nervous and blushing a bit and thinking i can't believe Polly is my dancing date.

Polly noticed he was still a bit nervous

and she said "now how about a kiss to loosen you up?"

He said "HUH?!" and he blushed even more than before as Polly kissed his lips.

he kissed her back and after wards they danced many dances together that night.

Just as they were about to leave Princess Vi said well you two I'm glad you got together do you have any future wedding plans.

"Maybe someday" they said and blushed "but for now we will just take it one step at a time."

The End

just a cute story to explain the pic

in the pics he's thinking I Can't Believe Polly is my dancing date

She's saying now how about a kiss to lossen you up

sorry i spelt it wrong in the pic

He says Huh?!

i used colored pencils