Flying High May Get Big Cheese A Black Eye or Not Unedited^^

Flying High May Get Big Cheese A Black Eye or Not Unedited^^

Yet another alternate after ending to the Comet fiasco

and no Black eyes will be given to Big Cheese By Polly

I just wanted a partly rhyming title^^

and unedited means not added stuff

it just means i just used colored pencils

and no HP Image editing^^



Princess V Was gonna banish Big Cheese he was certain of it.

But Luckily she decided to give him a chance to redeem himself.

Princess V turned out to have found his diary.

MY Diary Oh no he thought and blushed.

He was blushing Cuse of his secret he had kept hidden for so long.

About his being in love with Polly Esther.

"So Seymour this is why you have been acting so strangely."

"Yes it is I love her but I don't think she even likes me."

"If you can tell her how you really feel and even if she does not feel the same
I will not banish you and your crew."

"Thank you your highness."

Jerry Atric stopped him before he left and said.

"So Seymour does this mean you no longer wish to be a villain."

"Yes it does I mean I can't try to win Polly over by my dumb villainous tactics."

"Too True so I will take my leave me and your former crew can finally retire and go back to our village

Oh and if you do win her over

(which I doubt you can he thought to himself cuse he knew better and did not want Big cheese to explode}

Come visit us sometime."

"I will win her over that's for sure.

I will tell her how I feel and win her over at least I hope I can"

So he went to the top of the palace and made his tail split into two halves to reveal his copter part of it.

He was determined to do this right at least he hoped too.

He flew toward the Pizza cats Place and said "Hey I can see Polly's room from up here."

Polly was ready to get dressed after a shower then she took her towel off.

And she Spotted him outside the window And went "Eeep Big Cheese!?"

She blushed and covered up with it again.

Big Cheese Blushed and said "heh sorry."

Darn what a lousy impression he thought.

Then he thought on but wow what he could win.

He landed in her room and his tail closed back to it's normal form.

And he said "sorry about that" still blushing a bit.

Polly still blushing a bit said "Big Cheese what are you doing here."

He explained he was to be banished unless he did something that he would not normally have done in the past.

She was still blushing a bit she did not want him to be banished cuse she secretly liked him.

"What do you have to do?" she asked the fox.

"I have to tell someone how I really feel about them."

"Who?"

"Someone I meet long ago in the past and still know now.

Someone I hurt by calling them ugly and I should have told them just the opposite."

Polly blushed was he talking about her.

"Big Cheese what are you saying?"

"I'm saying I love you Polly I've loved you ever since my younger self meet you And fell for you.

And I fell as well cuse I never got over you.

It was the whole reason I became a villain to see you.

But I went about it the wrong way.

By staying a villain I only pushed you away from me.

And it made me hide my feelings from you cuse I did not think you liked me.

I should have just told you the truth instead of fighting you and the other cats for so long.

And I hope it is not too late for a chance for me and you to get together.





Polly said "it's never to late to redeem oneself and it is never to late for second or in this case first chances"

"Are you saying what I hope you're saying"

"I Love you too"

Then she kissed him and he kissed her back.

She pulled him closer toward her and they landed on her bed.

she removed her towel and he removed his clothes and now they were making love.

They were a bit loud which caused the two other pizza cats to run in and see what the noises were.

They gasped and gawked at the sight before them.

Big Cheese and Polly Blushed and covered up.

Polly said "You know doors are meant to be knocked on before i say go away

nest time use your brains."

They said "Uh okay but are we dreaming?"

They pinched their arms then went

"This isn't a dream it's a nightmare."

"Oh hush it i happen to love Big Cheese and he happens to love me deal with it."

"I love it when she says she loves me and yes i do love her too noting wrong when two love one another to show it."

"Okay okay we get it ya love each other now we gotta find some brain scrubbers."

then they left.

"They will get over it in time" Polly said.

"I hope so" he said

They kissed again and went to sleep for a while.

Later they told Princess V what transpired (minus the embarrassing parts.)

and that they loved each other and wished to marry eventually.

Princess V said "finally you're no longer a villain.

and Jerry said as they were leaving "And you did something right."

"I'll say he did. and kissed him on his cheek.

then they went on their way for some more loving.

Jerry thought I wonder what she meant by I'll say he did."

Oh well guess I"ll never know.

The End


Just a story to explain the pic

i used colored pencils for the unedited version