Goddess of Sorrow

First the happy dance ¨Saph does the happy dance¨ and the first review dance ¨does that to¨ then tell you why I am happy. Well my scanner works again it is a miracle!
Second I am not quite done with your pic I have been slacking and school has bothered me with its homework so yeah. ¨shrugs¨ but now to your pic.

The mouth is not that messed up but if you want a great tip that I made many misstakes with when I was new at drawing in manga style and I can see you have made it to. It is that the hair is to low. Want to know what I mean 'kay I'll try. You see the head is sort of round on the topp and quite big actually ¨nods¨ it is disturbing I know but true. You have to lift up the hair a bit to make the picture perfect, better with a bit to much than to little. ^-^ Dont worry about it I still do that misstake to but it is easy to make it go away, just add a bit more hair on the topp of the head and then it is done. ^-^
Hope you dont get sad but I am just trying to help you improve and I do the same misstakes sometimes to it is vey common. Hope you did not get to upset feel free to mention if I make some mistakes on my pics witch I probably will, I am just trying to improve and I am dragging you with me, lol ^-^.
I'll try to make your pic done by Sunday it is just that stupid hair that bothers me, I almost always take that last because it is really hard to get right.
See Ya and I'll leave a note when I post it, keep on doing your best ^_^
~Saph~