Scene from Chapter 1 in my YGO Story

I USED MY NEW CRAYOLA PENCIL CRAYONS WH00TN355 ^^ Ok this is a scene from my story (that i haven't even typed out yet) Duke and Joey were fighting over the foreign exchange student about if the student was a girl and who''d get her and the teacher asked both Duke and Joey to show the student around so...
Panel 1:
Flannery: Hello is this room 214? I'm the foreign exchange student
Panel 2:
Joey: *thinking* Score total hottie.*head turn* Now to make sure Devlin doesn't get his hands on her.
Duke: What''re you lookin at?
Panel 3:
Joey:*runs off*
Duke: *thinking* What''s he scheming
Panel 4:
Joey: On behalf of Domino high, I Joey Wheeler will show you around. And what''s your name?
Flannery: Oh really *giggle* Names Flannery. It''s a pleasure to meet you Joey
Duke: WHEELER!!
 
Joey and duke fans don''t kill me for their crappyness... has anyone else noticed how much Duke looks like Koga from Inuyasha ??
Enjoy^^