TFHCBD - Page 13 by G76 - Fanart Central

TFHCBD - Page 13

TFHCBD - Page 13 by G76

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I think I lost my way for this second half. This whole scene feels a bit forced to me...and reeks of someone who had no idea how he was going to finish the story.

But, you know, it's basically a superhero comic, and what's a superhero comic without the obligatory action scene? So, here it is. *sigh*

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
Date Submitted November 2, 2007, 12:41:39 PM
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Media Ink or markers
Time Taken Time lost meaning at this point
Reference Still personal stuff...

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marschiboi on November 2, 2007, 10:45:53 PM

i like that 'WOOSH' up there :) more soundeffects please! XD

G76 on November 3, 2007, 4:33:07 AM

I say that to myself. "More sound effects", but I always forget to do them. Even when it's on the computer and easier, and neater.

But I'll try to remember...;)

supergirlcomix on November 2, 2007, 10:47:09 AM

Dear goodness, I am being pointed at with a gun!! *gasp* (Love the old man's perspective view.) I love the gang's expression's of confusion at the loss of their weapons!! I love the gangster's teeth!! (Wooo!! You can draw teeth *dance*)And finally, I love the irony of 'peace' knuckles. XD Our hero arrives!! (He works the ski mask! XD)

G76 on November 3, 2007, 4:31:59 AM

You described everything on the page. XD Wow...there's not much I can say to that. Except spread some love...<3

Those 'peace' knuckles made me giggle a lot. Maybe it was the lack of sleep, but I thought it was real funny at the time.

supergirlcomix on November 3, 2007, 11:16:23 AM

I feel so appreciated. ^_^

Trinity_Fire on November 2, 2007, 8:15:54 AM

Hey, it looks quite fine to me. Whoo, action scene! Haha, I like the oh-so clever disguise. ;) (looks like he finally got up off the couch, huh?)
And those peace knuckles. Hehehe.

G76 on November 2, 2007, 9:11:15 AM

Yeah. I think I should've maybe kept him on the couch. To me it was more interesting when he was being lazy, instead of when he's acting like a hero. I don't know...I think I was trying to steer it toward the ending, so I just went with whatever would get me there.