Together...(please comment)

Alright these are my characters. The left is Uruchaas, and the right is Takeo.
To explain the text: Takeo and Uruchaas are like those friends you know are going to end up together, those friends that are like more than friends but aren't at the same time. Get what I'm saying? Any ways, they've known each other since they were little, like 5 or 6, and when they were 14 and 15, Takeo died after a terrible occurrence. So Uruchaas is alive and Takeo's dead, I would've made him all ghostly like but I loved how he came out XD;,with that information hopefully the text will make more sense. Uruchaas....Still working on her x.x;
Comments?
Suggestions?
Any thing anyone?



P.S: I know Takeo looks like Reno or whoever that final fantasy guy is, he is NOT based off of him. I've been drawing Takeo since before I saw him. I swear on my life x.x;