Hawk [Asleep and Alone] by Gothic_Tears

Hawk [Asleep and Alone]

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This is after he was beaten that day, he runs to his room after it and looks for someone to tell, no one talks to him or they block him. So he stayed on, waiting for someone to finally talk to him but they all leave sooner or later.<br />
This is the nite he decides to stop talking, go to kitti_is_my_name and look for 'Cryptic Illusion' for the whole story.<br />
Comment if you wish, I'd like tips on hw to get better, thanks...

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Male)
Date Submitted December 28, 2005, 6:28:30 PM
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EvilMatthew on July 17, 2010, 6:01:36 AM

Constructive criticism ahead: Use a sharper pencil, clean up lines and check out perspective. The dimensions here are wrong. Also it's really angsty.

steph on January 10, 2006, 1:46:43 AM

i like it its good and the crooked-ness makes it look better in my opinion ....*favs*

Gothic_Tears on January 2, 2006, 5:06:34 AM

The pic was DRAWN crooked.

kitti_is_my_name on January 1, 2006, 3:54:21 AM

Okay Asshole...the picture is FROM the story..not teh other way around...and another thing. Just because her computers a screw-up doesn't mean you should be cruel about it. So..from now on keep your mouth shut and your comments to yourself okay buddy? Good...now that that's over...good job I really like this picture. No need to fix it because of some Asshole..

-Kitti-chan/Cheese-chan
=^///^=

shadowed_vamp on December 31, 2005, 7:43:34 AM

ok, how to get better....dont put detailed pictures like this on so crooked. its too hard to tell what the picture is. And dont do stories for your pictures....too lame..