Um, what are you doing? by GreyJedi

Um, what are you doing?

Description

It's Torn and Ripp, yes that tall guy's Torn. Don't bug me about it. Yes he has eyebrows, at this point he's supposed to, no his hair isn't in dreads, and he doesn't have his tattoos yet. He looks strangely built, I didn't mean to do that. I guess after a summer at a KG training camp he'd have a bit more muscle to him than normal.
Anyway, it's the lineart of the two of them standing around, Torn's looks confused by the way Ripp's standing and seems unaware that he's standing pretty much the same way. (In all honesty they're standing that way because I really suck at poses.)
The title? The title is what's going through Torn's mind as he's looking at Ripp.
Enjoy, if you can....

Edit: I tried to make Torn less muscular, I'm not entirely sure that it worked...

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Category Games » - All Titles » Jak & Daxter series
Date Submitted September 10, 2007, 5:44:54 AM
Views 1300
Favorites... 0
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Comments 9
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken A couple hours. *shrugs*, I'm not really sure
Reference Nothing

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Midnight_Chaos on October 19, 2007, 11:09:34 PM

They're both look awesome!! Torn looks quite different without his tattoos, dreads and with eyebrows O.O It's hard to picture him like that, so thanks for drawing him!! Ripp's looking the lil cutie copying his older bro XD Great lineart too; it's very neat. Excellent pic GreJedi!!

Midnight_Chaos on October 19, 2007, 11:11:55 PM

Oh man, that first line doesn't make sense...why didn't you tell me Fionn!! Just um....either replace They're with They or add ing onto the end of Look...and that should suffice *shifty eye* it's only 11pm...why am I making spelling mistakes?!
Sharok: Because you're stupid...it's a pity I don't have that "you are stupid" sign on here too...-_-;

GreyJedi on October 20, 2007, 5:54:57 AM

Heh, I didn't even catch the mistake the first time I read it, I've been awake for 37 hours straight though, mustn't let my mother know about that.... Thank! :D

Midnight_Chaos on October 20, 2007, 10:19:47 PM

I left out y in your name too!! Oh man, my spelling was the worst last night -_-; So much for double checking my comments...stupid Sharok...if he wasn't distracting me *pouting glare*
Fionn: But Shar-san wasn't distracting you.
Corad: Yeah, trust you to stick up for him...you've been awake for 37 hours?! How the....how did you manage that?! I can't even stay awake for 20....you must've been worn out lol.
Sharok: Heh, you don't even need to be awake to be worn out, Corad...just lying there is tiresome enough for you *snickers*
Corad: *horrified gasp* You told my secret! Secret teller!!! *narrows eyes* The war's on, Sharok...the war is on....>.<*

GreyJedi on October 21, 2007, 1:33:38 AM

One word: Sleepover. :D Me and two other girls, one fell asleep after twelve by me and my other friend sat there talking the whole night. I finally hit the hay at the thirty nine hour mark.
The funny thing is, I didn't notice your mistakes until you pointed them out.
Oo! War! Can I help?!
Ripp: You want to help? Why?
GreyJedi: Cause it sounds fun!
Ripp: -_-;

TornsKickasskitty on September 11, 2007, 9:29:17 PM

Nice I've read the story and like it And I imagine young torn like that anyways

GreyJedi on September 11, 2007, 10:06:53 PM

Thanks. Glad you like both. :D

TornsKickasskitty on September 13, 2007, 8:36:07 AM

Have you seen my OC and Torn Kissing Picyutr yet? I like it and I have a fan fiction as weel

GreyJedi on September 13, 2007, 10:29:57 AM

I'll go have a look, but I don't think I'll have time to read at the moment, I'm supposed to be doing homework.