StarClan! Why did you let this happen!

Yet another IceXSnow pic! I'm obsessing over the couple...
Anyway, I tried another style of coloring this time, oil pastel, tell me what you think!! =P

*spoilers!*(not sure if this will be the exact wording in our story) Icegaze frantically pressed the cobwebs to Snowclaw's bleeding side, but it wasn't enough, the blood just kept on soaking them. "You're going to be ok, you have to be ok!" Icegaze blinked back the grief. Snowclaw shook his head, the effort leaving him exhausted, "You have to let me go," he rasped. Icegaze grabbed more cobwebs to replace the already soaked ones, "No, NO, NO! You have to get better, you can't leave me!" She started trembling. A trickle of blood fell out the side of Snowclaw's mouth, Icegaze could see the shine of StarClan in his scarlet eyes. Snowclaw managed a weak smile, "I'll never leave you, even if you can't see me, I'll always be with you." His body jerked once more and fell comletely still. Icegaze pressed her nose against his fur, not caring if his blood got on her. The warmth already seeping from his body. She threw up her head and cried, "StarClan! Why did you let this happen!". Snowclaw's scent wound around Icegaze, and his voice drifted through her mind, "I'll never leave you, or our kits." His scent faded and Icegaze's threw up her head again and wailed, all her grief pouring out of her in that one terrible sound.*end spoilers*