Request for Yoikawa [REDONE!]

Would you look at that! I redid this picture too like I said I would! I'm not too fond of this, it's just a rough sketch with some crappy coloring thrown onto it, but I wanted to keep my word and redo it!<br />
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So here you go, Yoikawa, hope you like it!<br />
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Comments welcome.<br />
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Oh and by the way, sorry if something came out wrong, no refrence was used.