Dreea

She's gorgeous, but I have a question: If she's paired with Rei, then how come Rei and Cassie have sex in that story you wrote? BTW about that story, if that Cassie is you then you forgot to include what a good artist and author you are. I AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN!!

First thing that i like was the eyes. :)

But the thing i really have a problem with is the lover half of the face. it seems to really jut out there and the nose and lips are pretty small compaired with the first top of your face. Your nose and lips should be almost around the same height or larger as you're eyes to have an even look about them.

When you look a manga you really see that, but if you look at the profile of someone in real life's face, you see that they eyes take up only a small proportion of the face. So it should be sort of a balancing act depending on which way you want to go, anime has huge eyes, but also had pretty fair amount sized nose and lips that nearlly equal the eyes.

Google some anime profiles and you'll see what i mean by balancing act. :)