Father's Birthday Present by HikariYugiYamiAtemu

Father's Birthday Present

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This is a birthday present for my father, I told PataPata that I will show her this picture when I'm done so here it is! ^^

the things in the bubble are the presents that I want to buy for my father and the only bubble that glows brightly are the certificate and that's the best present for my father! ^^

the background is a ittle messy though, and overall, I don't think I'm satisfied with this but my father said he like it and now, he put the picture on the board in his office! XD

please comment and tell me what you think about this picture, you can als tell me the mistakes I've done! ^^; after all, it helps me improve my drawing skills..:)

my mother told me that I have a lot of mistakes and she gave me 65 points! XD lol...

Enjoy! :P

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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Female » Teenagers (13-18)
Date Submitted January 8, 2008, 12:56:57 AM
Views 1642
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Vote Score 5

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TheWolfsgirl90 on August 5, 2008, 6:22:45 AM

wow!!!really sweet^^

I believe that your dad was happy about this^^

b^.^

I like it very^^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on March 11, 2008, 4:28:04 PM

thanks for the comments, everyone! X3

zeldafan92 on March 2, 2008, 5:08:10 AM

wow! That atually is really good. No joke! Only thing i can think of are the hands being a bit to small. Hands should cover your face is you hold it up. The reason i do compare the hand and the head is because your less like to make the head disproportional than the arms or whatever.

I personally love the background and have nothing but praise for the rest of you pic. i give it an honest 95% just because i know it's your style and it looks good in it's own special way ^_~

Moon_Princess on January 24, 2008, 11:27:54 AM

Awww, so cute! I'm sure your dad will love it! ^.^
Amazing job!!

~Moon_Princess

PataPata on January 21, 2008, 10:56:04 AM

YAY I'm mentioned! :D
I'm really glad your father likes this and actually put the picture on the board of his office.
I mean seriously, what's not to like about this picture?
The bubbly/watery background is a wonderful touch.
The font is nice too.
OH CHOCOLATE<33
The idea of putting the different presents into bubbles was an original idea!
You'll be a great doctor!
And you look spiffy, haha.
I agree with KelekiahGaladrian about the hands, but everything else looks perfect.
Keep on drawing! :D

FullMoonRose on January 9, 2008, 6:01:03 AM

awww that is so cute i love the bubbles

TaisyXPegasus on January 9, 2008, 3:44:56 AM

If I was your dad I'll be very proud!!!!!So cool!!!!

*Too bad,my step-father don't look at my art...=((((**Feels sad*

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on January 8, 2008, 3:23:50 PM

by the way, if you're wondering why I'm wearing grey/white clothes like that, it's because my father wants me to become a doctor so I dressed up like a real Doctor in this picture! ^^

thanks for the comments, everyone! *glomps all of you* ^^;

KionaKina on January 8, 2008, 10:35:56 AM

AWW! How cute!! He'll love it ^_^

RoseQueen on January 8, 2008, 7:58:59 AM

Wow! This is neat!

KelekiahGaladrian on January 8, 2008, 6:38:10 AM

That is so sweet and it looks awesome. The only mistake I could find on this pic was the fact that the hands are really small. You might try to draw bigger hands, just a word of adivce. Overall, it looks really good and I can see why your father loved it. ^^ Great job! *favs*

ranphasetokelly on January 8, 2008, 3:23:33 AM

aww i love it x333

xlittlexprincessx on January 8, 2008, 1:13:29 AM

is cool girl

Falconlobo on January 7, 2008, 11:13:33 PM

it's very nice i like the colors

and eyes and hair

nice bubbles with cuteness^^

YamisSister on January 7, 2008, 8:25:51 PM

It's looks really cool! ^^
You draw the pic very well!
I like the bubbles effect! ^_^