Line of Evil: Prologue

Yes, this is the prologue of a comic I'm gonna start posting here (I've already started posting it on DeviantArt) called "Line of Evil" whether people read it or not. It was first done in celebration of finally being able to draw Jack Spicer (spiky-haired-goggled guy) right in his original style rather than Anime-nizing him.

Summary:

When Light Yagami (guy ranting about his little notebook) first realizes what he's gonna do with the Death Note, he's suddenly transported to another dimension to properly register as an official villain. Of course, he doesn't believe himself to be evil, and thus does not think he belongs there. However, the only way to exit this dimension, apparently, is to wait in line to be registered just like every other villain. But he can't wait that long! There is just too much for him to do! He doesn't have time for this! So, with the help of Jack Spicer, Evil Boy Genius, he resolves to cut through the colossal line to make the process go faster so he can proceed with his plans. Sounds simple enough, yes? Unfortunately, the other villains waiting aren't very appreciative of this idea, so it becomes a bit more difficult than he'd initially anticipated...

Hehe... That's the gist of it. Basically, it's gonna be a huge crossover comic featuring numerous villains from various fandoms (anime, books, manga, video games...)! Also, it's a little experiment for me to see if I can also draw other styles from other shows now that I have Xiaolin Showdown's style finally mastered! Also, I just love villains.

~~~~~AS A FUTURE NOTE: I OWN NONE OF THE CHARACTERS I USE UNLESS I SAY OTHERWISE (I do own any stick-men or extras such as the ones at the bottom of this page (horned man and bald alien woman)). THEY ALL BELONG TO THEIR RESPECTIVE COMPANIES AND OWNERS AND CREATORS. I AM MAKING $0 FROM THIS. IN FACT, IT'S COSTING ME MONEY IF ANYTHING.~~~~~

Also, what he's saying (I'll be doing this for all future pages as well in case my handwriting is illegible for whatever reason):

The Prologue

Light: *thinking & panicking* The Death Note... It's REAL... Those men are DEAD because of me... *clenches Death Note* But, wait... I can't just turn in a powerful object like this to the authorities... They'd abuse its power in all the wrong ways! And what about me? If I turn this in and the police can somehow prove that this notebook can kill, then I'd be sent to prison! I could just use this myself... This world is rotting and those that are making it rot deserve to DIE. Yes... I can see it now! I'll ELIMINATE those filthy criminals with this as my weapon! I will CLEANSE this world! I'll do it. Yes, I'll do what no man has dared to do before! And once its all finished... *raises DN up in triumph, out loud* I WILL REIGN AS GOD OF THE NEW WORLD!!
Jack Spicer: *taps Light's shoulder* Hey... *jabs thumb towards group of villains (evil stick-men *snicker* )* Get in line, buddy.
Stick Man 1: Dude, was he just INTERNALLY MONOLOGUING?!
Stick Man 2: I know! The nerve of some people!
Horned Villain: fracking no0b.

Ehehe... This Artist Comment is so... wordy. '__'U Don't worry, people who might read this. It will most definitely NOT always be like this. Trust me.

1st Page: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-788886.html