FF Fhame pg 9 by Iheartpudding

FF Fhame pg 9

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I know I didn't keep the same face structure from the 3rd for the 4th frame. I was going to start over, but look at those hands... I don't think I could have done those again.

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Category Comics » - Original Comics
Date Submitted September 22, 2006, 6:25:32 PM
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silverfox on January 17, 2007, 2:31:14 PM

I wasn't going to comment until I'd read the whole thing, but I really] like that last panel, so I had to comment now lest I forget. :D

Blade on November 23, 2006, 9:25:22 PM

Intresting set up.
The word bubbles don't really fit however. Write your words first, then draw bubbles around them, it's one of the first rules of cartooning. Also, try to keep your colors and graidents more solid, if you're using pencil smudge it with your finger then clean it up and add lights with an eraser. You're getting better at this though!

Trinity_Fire on September 23, 2006, 1:28:11 AM

Awww, Fhame is so uber-pretty, and I love his outfit design.
DAMN, what's up with you californians and your awesome designs, too??? ;o; I feel so alone..

Awesome~! Fhame has become a new bishy for me, officially. 8D

Keep it up~!