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Vengeance

Vengeance

Vengeance by InvdrDana
Vengeance by InvdrDana

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InvdrDana
This is what happens when looking through Mechmaker's (mechmaker.deviantart.com/) gallery at 4 A.M. He draws a lot of battle scenes with characters in the most awesome poses. Since I always get inspiration when browsing amazing pics/stories, I knew I had to try my hand at some interesting poses as well. Plus I was getting bored of the usual poses I do. So I drew the poses using the stick-figure method and this gradually evolved. I also had to act out the poses too to see how accurate it was. The blood didn't come 'til much later. It didn't really have any meaning at firt, but then I thought of a story to go with it! Haha! :D

His deep hatred of others and morbid sense of reality eventually caused Graze to go mad. That combined with him being a defective made him ever more dangerous. This label also was reason enough for Irken authorities to go after him so he could be dealt with properly. Unfortunately for them, anyone in his midst would be killed, usually in very painful and slow ways. It was all a sick and twisted game to him. And each time someone was killed, it was always done in a different manner. His reign of terror had to be stopped.

The Tallest hired a group of skilled Invaders to get rid of Graze once and for all. Invader Kun brought the team to a warehouse where Graze had last been spotted. As they made their way through the building, Graze successfully killed most of them off, using the lurking techniques he had mastered. It was now up to Kun and a badly wounded Invader Trek to take Graze down. Trek stood guard outside of a room while Kun went in. When Kun approached the shadows, the door slammed shut and Graze jumped out at him. From the looks of it, he had just killed someone else since the blood was fresh. Kun attempted to kick his opponent, but Graze caught his leg before he could do anything, which also caused Kun to drop his gun/laser thing. Graze then brought out his own gun/laser thing, and was about to shoot when Kun used his other leg to kick the gun away and grab his fallen gun. Then there's more fighting stuff; Graze is killed at last; yada, yada, yada.

Unless you want to go with the classic "everyone dies but the bad guy who goes on to kill more people" ending. Or the "everyone dies except for the main character and bad guy" ending in which the bad guy comes back for round two in the sequel. :P

Self-Critique

Epic win, that's all I'll say. My first attempt at blood isn't anything spectacular, but I like it nonetheless. I was thinking about CSI while doing it. XD

Invader Zim © Jhonen Vasquez
Kun, Trek, and Graze © Me

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Category Cartoons » Invader Zim » Fan Characters (OC's)
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inbari on August 17, 2009, 6:19:13 PM

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inbarireally nice!

InvdrDana on August 18, 2009, 5:24:55 AM

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InvdrDanaThanks! ^^

Falconlobo on August 7, 2009, 4:28:41 PM

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Falconlobocool nice poses^6

InvdrDana on August 8, 2009, 2:27:15 PM

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InvdrDanaGlad you think so. ^^

Falconlobo on August 9, 2009, 3:51:25 AM

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Falconlobonp^^

CrystalKnight on August 7, 2009, 5:03:10 PM

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CrystalKnightIrkens~~~

InvdrDana on August 8, 2009, 2:27:44 PM

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InvdrDanaYep, they're Irkens alright.