WIP Kyoya

My grandson is watching Beyblade Metal fusion. This is a sketch of my favorite charactor, it's not very good. 


i did a fan art of him once befor and it was really bad. This is better but I am still not pleased with it

This is better than the last one, not because it looks more like Kyoya, but because it's not ugly...LOL

This guy looks ok, just not quite right. 

I'll probably color it later.

what's wrong with this picture? these are things I wish I could fix.

-his eyes are too close together and one is too large relative to the other,
-his hair is too even and too straight up, too many separate sections...or something. 
-the size and angle of his shoulders is off somehow.
-that throws off his jacket, so the two sides are uneven,
-his pony tail is just...wrong. I don't know how.

that's what I noticed. you notice anything else that could be improved?
can you suggest how to improve those things?