looks sorta like craaaaap!

Not really,looks pretty cool actually,yet all I have to say is OMFG ARE YOU NAKED ON THE LEFT SIDE OF TEH PAGE?!If my character Drip were real he'd probably say he's horny...WHAT?!He's brother of Lust,like I'm the sister of Envy..Mmm..Perhaps you can mention this within your fic..Well it would probably go like this.....


Envi was on the computer,wondering around from site to site within a daze...
When suddenly,she saw an image of her vampire comrade.Impressed by her
masterpiece,yet,Envi's pine green eyes noticed the drawing of her comrade's self on the left side of page!!And then,reminded her,if her rapist
brother,a horny sex machine were to lay his eyes upon this...Well anyways,
Envi being stunned by this sat there puzzled within her chair,not noticing that
Jazmyn had walked in within the room and roared "WTF ENVI?!WHAT ARE YA LOOKIN AT?!OMG IS THAT ME?!Wait..Could this mean..THAT CHASE HAS BEEN TAKING SNAP SHOTS OF ME NAKED?!OMG!!" And Jazmyn
grabbed Envi by her shoulders and swung her out of the chair,as if she had been a rag doll and began
printing,printing to show the dragon boy what perverted deed he has committed.Meanwhile,the shadow girls stood,and poked their heads to only see their fallen mistress/referee.Baracia pouted for now she had no one to keep score of the people who she had slayed,Belle looked confused she had no idea if she should be shocked or worried that the powerful vampire maiden might strike her down next,Beth,grinned,a look of pure sadistic insanity within her gun metal gray eyes,a true psycho,another challenge,Breanna,being the most naive and childish of the group shrieked and rushed to aid Envi.Thinking that she might be dead,scared out of her wits.Envi laid there,
motionless,and envious,and just had to ask herself "Why couldn't I have crimson wings upon my back?" remembering that Jazmyn's nude self had this crimson wings that sat upon the girl's slender back.



Or maybe it wouldn't go like that...Yet all I know if that Breanna would wail if I or anyone got hurt.

waaaah hahahahahahahahahahaha! XD thanx... that was hilarious!