Kiff: Stuka Chaser

I agree with the general consensus. <br />
The wings are a bit awkward looking. I think if they were put closer together, that would be taken care of. <br />
The strong points in this piece are definitely your inking and hatching skills. Using lines for shading and blocking is NOT an easy task, but your use of varied textures works well. <br />
Also, your hands are done well. I can't draw them for crap, so the fact that you can is impressive ot me. ^^<br />
Good job, this is definately one of the nicer drawings on the site! Keep up the good work. <br />

I agree with stratadrake on the legs. If you could add some fur there, then it'd look near perfect.<br />
Very nice pic!<br />
For those who are unaware, stratadrake and I are part of a critique group in the forums. These comments are not meant to show dislike, just to suggest improvement at the artist's request.

One of the things I noticed is Kiff's wings; to me, they looks a little off-balance. Perhaps her left wing is too low or the right wing too high. I also notice that Kiff's wings are folded into the "dive position", close together for quick descent and rapid build-up of airspeed. She'll need to spread those wings wider in order to glide.<br />
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Knowing that Kiff is entirely furry, her leg outlines look a little too smooth, un-furry. They could use those little details like on her forearms (just near the elbow) to help imply fur and not skin.<br />
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The swept-back look on Kiff's hair works okay here to imply motion, since she's jumping out of a plane and all. And her expression works well too, showing her love of the air.<br />
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Can we see the full (resized, not cropped) version sometime?

Hey thats really cool! I like your stuff!!!