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Splash! Les garcons

Splash! Les garcons

Splash! Les garcons by KingdomHeartShera
Splash! Les garcons by KingdomHeartShera

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KingdomHeartShera
This is the companion piece to my last piccehs. Oh, and if ya didn't know, 'les filles' means "the girls" and 'les garcons' means "the boys." I'm probably getting something gramatically wrong, but sue me. I only took one year of French. XDDD

I like this one less then the last, but it's my boyos. How can I hate it? XD Poor Kybo. ^^;; Waice takes no prisoners. I just hope Zephyr doesn't spaz and use his power in the water. o.O Lightening + water = nono. XD And yeah, I'm probably getting something wrong in thier anatomy again, but I tried. Waice is supposed to be bigger and more buff then Kybo, which fits him; he's a daegon Half-breed, which are typically of a large and more muscular build then Feluins, and he's also a year older then mah kitteh-boy. =3

And Zephyr's just a twig. <333 I really need to draw more of those two so you can become familiar with 'em. So, anyone want to color this for me? XD

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Trinity_Fire on October 9, 2007, 7:49:04 AM

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Trinity_FireAh, nah-ah. :3 Your anatomy is quite fine~ It's more detailed than mine, actually, lol. XD; But I really don't mind the anatomy here~ nicely done~ and those water droplets! And this was inked, right? Your inking is so darn smooth and clean. D: I'm envious, seriously.

Ummm I think though that the kitty boy, Kybo, was it? I think hie left hand's thumb is on the wrong side~ :] And... It's more a personal preference, but the right hand, the way the fingers are done~ try to make fingers a bit more shapely and solid than ovals; real fingers are never ovals, even when curled around like that. Fingers are actually more like skewed rectangles, so I usually work with rectangles rather than circles, then round off the edges later. It works often enough. ;)

And ummm (sorry! /. .\) Waice, the dragon guy? For his tail, if you ARE doing this first in pencil then pen, don't be afraid to sketch out where the whole tail goes, then only ink the parts that show. This way, the tail doesn't look disconnected, and the right thickness/tapering effect is achieved. :) I do that lately with the wings I draw, too; this way they actually look attached to the back and not just floating behind the body~ it's really very helpful, and you can always just erase the 'hidden' parts later if it's only pencil; don't be afraid to draw things that won't be in the final version; that's what wireframes are all about, and it really makes everything look right in the end. :)

But really, love your inking, and such an awesome pic. :D Keep it up~♥ (I really do want you to improve~ I love your art so much, and you're such a nice person~ ;) )

KingdomHeartShera on October 9, 2007, 11:18:21 PM

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KingdomHeartSheraThanks! ^^ I'm so glad it's okay. I luve your men, though! Much better then mine, at least. And the strange part about the inking is that I do it in every-day, garden-variety pens. XDDD

o.O Really? I tried to fix that . . . must not've been paying attention. ^^;; One of my biggest problems is the fact that I discover all my issued with a picceh after it's inked. >.> And jah, I know that about the fingers- however, like I said, just wasn't paying attention when I was inking this in. ^^;; Need more practice, I suppose.

As for Waice's tail, I DID do that. o.O I always do a basic outline/stick figure, then add details before inking in. I didn't realize that it looked disconnected. ^^;; Like I said, I guess I need more practice.

You're so awesome! ^^ *loveslovesloveslovesloves*

Trinity_Fire on October 10, 2007, 7:27:18 AM

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Trinity_FireWell, then it might've had to do with the smoothness of the curve. But remember, with any type of tail in general, it starts at a certain thickness and just tapers down to the point! Don't change around the thickness throughout; the slimming down is pretty uniform, which is why tails look so smooth and all. :) It's just that the part we can see of the tail between his legs is kinda slimming quickly, but then the last part to the left is slimming in a whole different way... I dunno, does that make any sense??? >>;
I-I'm sorry~ but it is very nice! If I look at it for a while, I kinda see what you mean~ you just need one really smooth curve for the tail, and I think the problem will resolve itself. :) (<--loves smooth lines, but also is terrible at inking them, lol)
I understand where you're coming from. I hate it when things I draw don't connect, either. >>;
But keep it up! You're so good, really~ ♥

KingdomHeartShera on October 10, 2007, 10:08:02 PM

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KingdomHeartSheraNo, makes sense. I'm not very good at animal parts. ^^;; I've been thinking about a different way to draw Kybo's ears, and looked at some piccehs of lizard tails. I think I can draw them a different way now. The issue is that I've been drawing them a certain way for so long that it's hard to stop. ^^;; But I'm doing my best to improve.

Gawd, you're so nice! <333 Thankies!

mandy94t on October 9, 2007, 3:30:49 AM

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mandy94twell I WOULD color it but some prick swiped all my coloring pencils and I suck anyways.^ ^ '

KingdomHeartShera on October 9, 2007, 11:13:45 PM

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KingdomHeartSheraXD 'Tima's coloring the original for me, but that's okay. Damn theives. >.> And I like your coloring, silly! ^^ Thanks for ze comment.

tayloralisa on October 9, 2007, 6:21:49 AM

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tayloralisaWoo! Hotness!^0^