Walk (Red Sun Edit)

Meh, just the lil' edited piccy I was talking about. Will narrow those two down soon.

Anywho, for those who cannot read ze poem:

Walk along the walls
Hear my heart a flutter
The pinprick tears a hole
And the threads just fall away--Walk between the lines
Of past and new transgression
Read my swollen lips
And fall on Raven’s cry--Walk through my December
Of frozen processed glory
Listen to my whisper
As I go and taint the sky--Walk beside my shadow
I hope that you can see me
Can you hear me breathing?
You stole my lungs away--Walk beneath the water
See my ugly illusion
Watch my sin consume me
And save me if you try--For I am one of ill reason
I am one of insanity
I hope I’ve made you happy
You stole my life away

(...this was a long freakin' comment O_O)