Little Mayu-chan! (Rough)

Yay! Here's little Mayu-chan! Another OC from my manga^^ Ain't she kyoot?? She's got her little teddy bear named Ms. Ichigo (Ichigo meaning strawberry in Japanese) (I also drew Miyuki, see here http://www.fanart-central.net/pictures.php?pid=216969 ) I'm gonna CG this (eventually @_@) I know some things are off and I looks really sketchy, but I'll fix that when I ink it^^ (no, it's not inked, it only looks that way 'cuz I darkened it in photoshop, It's all pencil^^) (the brown smudges are there because I drew this with slightly dirty hands *silly me* heh heh ^-^') <br />
Anywho, Comments and Constructive Critisism are appreciated.<br />
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Sketch; 20 min.<br />
CG; erm.. 2 min. (to add text and darken lines)