Mistress of the Key (No light effect)

Ughh >.> I submitted the same picture twice -__-, However the first version I submitted had a weird lighting effect and surely enough it makes it look cool and creepy, but you can't the shading on the hair and face I did (and the hair took a while) so I don't know... Well, I am an artist, so I'm allowed to overly fret about the quaility of my pictures. lol <br />
Like I said before, I like this concept for a picture, I might do a full body Image later^^ <br />
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Comments are WORSHIPED same for constuctive critisism^^<br />
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Sketch; 30 min.<br />
CG;5-6 hrs.