Yoh!!

Cool. Awesome job. Here have a doughnut. *shoves a doughnut down your throat*

I'ma extremely depressed right now, so .... I shall constructively criticize your picture instead of shootting on it! Isn't that what you've always wanted? Huh? HUH???? Anydamnway... His left arm.... the first half of it is too long. Gr! If I could talk to you in person, this would make more sense. The sleeves need to be gravaty-nated. They're sorta floaty up, if you haven't really noticed. The eyes look great. The pants look tight, unless that's how it's supposed to be. Try to draw them a bit.... wider. Meh, maybe they're supposed to be though. The hands look great. The suitcase could've been done with a ruler, and made into a nice square shape... but I know how laziness can get to people. NOt saying that you're lazy >.> The bottom pant folds... those are a bit too wide. Remember the rule of gravity. And remember that unless he's wearing flared pants... they shouldn't be so puffed out. Lovely signature. I don't know if you'll know what I'm talking about, but the two lines that show the pants going behind his back at the very top near the belt? Yeah. Those hafta be lower, since it currently give sthe impression that the front of his pants are sliding down and forward. Yes, I'll shut up! Besides that, great job! If you really want constructive criticism, come over sometime and I'll point things out so that what I say'll make more sense >.> and I could also point out a few other things that I can't really explain right now. Well, that was probably a 30 min comment on a 10 min pic! YAY!