Edward in Pink Pajamas Edit

This is a reposting of a picture that is currently not working even though I have edited it a thousand times. Here is the original context on the first picture.

I got the idea for this picture from a picture in the Chinese fangame Bluebird's Illusion where Ed is wearing Al PJs. If you are wondering about the strange black thing next to one of the bed's legs, it's an evil kitty that stole Edo's breakfast. You can see that the kitty has a carton of eggs next to it (Ed was going to have cooked eggs for breakfast). I got the idea from my little sister who, immediatly after seeing my original sketch, said, "You should have an evil kitty stealing his eggs!" I don't know how the world she got the idea that Ed was going to have eggs for breakfast, but I did it anyway because it is so random and funny. Once again, my evil scanner made this picture look much worse than it does in real life. Any comments and/or critism?